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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 13:46 Di 04.10.2005 | | Autor: | suzan |
halööchen zusammen,
please write down what happened at your last birthday. use the past tense. write about eight or ten sentences.
On my last birthday I became 21.
I was at home with my boyfriend and my daughter Cecile.
It was a boring day, but my boyfriend brought me to laugh.
In the evening as my daughter gone sleep, my boyfriend and I drank sparkling wine.
We had candle light and sweet musik and we talked about us.
I hadn't got a party, because I hadn't no lust of so many people.
I wanted a sweet day with my little family.
That was my last birthday.
kann man das so schreiben?
LG
Suzan
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Hi,
> please write down what happened at your last birthday. use
> the past tense. write about eight or ten sentences.
>
> On my last birthday I became 21.
Da würde ich eher sagen
Last time I had my birthday I became 21.
Ich weiß aber nicht ob der erste Satz falsch ist.
> I was at home with my boyfriend and my daughter Cecile.
I stayed at home with my boyfriend and my daughter Cecile.
> It was a boring day, but my boyfriend brought me to
> laugh.
It was a boring day, but my boyfriend made me laugh.
> In the evening as my daughter gone sleep, my boyfriend and
> I drank sparkling wine.
In the evening, after my daughter had gone to bed, my boyfriend and I drank sparkling wine.
> We had candle light and sweet musik and we talked about
> us.
We lit candles. listened to sweet musik and talked about us.
> I hadn't got a party, because I hadn't no lust of so many
> people.
I didn't have a party, because I didn't feel like having so many people over.
Wenn man "lust" im English sagt, meint das Wolllust, auf jemanden scharf sein.
> I wanted a sweet day with my little family.
I wanted to spend a beautiful day with my family.
> That was my last birthday.
> kann man das so schreiben?
Die Sätze sind jetzt zwar in Ordnung, aber für nen Test solltest du noch mal ordentlich büffeln.
Gruß,
Rachel
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Hi,
> please write down what happened at your last birthday. use
> the past tense. write about eight or ten sentences.
>
> On my last birthday I became 21.
Da würde ich eher sagen
Last time I had my birthday, I became 21.
Ich weiß aber nicht ob der erste Satz falsch ist.
> I was at home with my boyfriend and my daughter Cecile.
I stayed at home with my boyfriend and my daughter Cecile.
> It was a boring day, but my boyfriend brought me to
> laugh.
It was a boring day, but my boyfriend made me laugh.
> In the evening as my daughter gone sleep, my boyfriend and
> I drank sparkling wine.
In the evening, after my daughter had gone to bed, my boyfriend and I drank sparkling wine.
> We had candle light and sweet musik and we talked about
> us.
We lit candles. listened to sweet musik and talked about us.
> I hadn't got a party, because I hadn't no lust of so many
> people.
I didn't have a party, because I didn't feel like having so many people over.
Wenn man "lust" im English sagt, meint das Wolllust, auf jemanden scharf sein.
> I wanted a sweet day with my little family.
I wanted to spend a beautiful day with my family.
> That was my last birthday.
> kann man das so schreiben?
Die Sätze sind jetzt zwar in Ordnung, aber für nen Test solltest du noch mal ordentlich büffeln.
Gruß,
Rachel
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